Saturday, 29 March 2014

Double Page Spread - First Draft


Peer and teacher feedback:
  • Make page number smaller
  • Add page number to both sides of the page - as a double page spread, it should have two numbers
  • Make text columns smaller
  • Pull quotes need to be in the text - can't just be used out of context
  • Use red to highlight social media/web address

Friday, 28 March 2014

Contents Page - First Draft


Peer and teacher feedback: 
  • fix the alignment of the subheadings and their stories
  • make "Robyn Talks" the same size as the other pictures
  • work on making the cropping of the full body shot more neat
  • make "MUSE" stand out more - add an outline of the text in white
  • change the date to match the front cover
  • fix grammatical errors

Front Cover - First Draft


Peer and teacher feedback:
  • Re-position the barcode
  • Add issue number
  • Add web address
  • Move image over slightly to the left
  • Fix grammatical errors
  • Add a tagline